
This entry shows a good level of expertise above the other entry, the whole map feels cohesive, but it does toe the line of being a bit too safe as this map overuses very specific slightly curved 1/4 slider patterning , this led the slower sections that show some creativity to be the standout parts for me such as 01:10:716 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - 02:06:411 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - and 03:02:369 (1,1,1,1,1) -. Overall this does win but its not by a landslide

This entry has some interesting ideas throughout, but it loses to the other entry in terms of expertise, this entry could have been great if you had built something more from the baseline ideas that you have with repetition and mirroring patterns and finding a way to elevate those ideas (a good example of this is the pattern at 02:37:595 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - , i expected this to be built upon a lot in this section as earlier in the map it teases repetition with sections like 00:44:986, so this just felt like a missed opportunity to tie the whole map together and build upon earlier concepts) . Another standout issue for me was the hitsounding, most of the keysounding is slightly off-pitch, and the choice to overuse the default drum-hitclap when the song doesnt have a strong drum instrumental to support it is very jarring